Will you rate my Yu Gi Oh Deck?

Your deck is ok. From the looks of it you just bought the Dark Emperor Structure Deck and just added some cards. First thing I see is that you only run one d fissure and one macro. You need macro and fissure at 3. Fissure can be played at 2 but 3 is recomended. I would take out dd scout plane because he comes back in attack mode and replace with a dd survivor that is way better (always have 3 survivor). Take out the bazoos and d alch because most of your cards will be out of play. If you can get another dd assailant i would replace one of the dd warriors with it and replace the other dd warrior with a dd warrior lady. If you like the power up ability of golden homunculus then you should look into running one or two gren maju da eiza. Similar effect to homunculus but it is only 3 stars. For spells you need to add 2 mystical space typhoon. 2 mst are staples that everyone has. Also you need a giant trunade. Replace lightning vortex with a dark hole. vortex is a -2 while dark hole is usually only -1. take out tribute to the doomed because you already have a dark core. Look into enemy controller. Tribute one of your monsters to take control of an opponites. That means free monster with survivor. you do not need soul release ether because of macro and fissure. To help get the cards you need run 2 or 3 gold sarcophogus. Take out trap hole because you already have 2 bottomless. I would replace sakuretsu with d prison but you do not have to. take out slip of fortune. add a second cylinder if you have one. take out dust tornado when you add the 2 mst. take out raigeki break because it is a -2 and not that good. In general try and keep your deck count to around 40 cards and your looking good.